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> Sorry, that last project description was the wrong file. This
> should be the right one. (01)
Ken, (02)
This looks good. Below are some specific copy edits. (03)
I notice that neither I nor BBN are mentioned in the Project
Description, which might lead reviewers to question our role. Given
the application rather than technology focus, I don't see an obvious
place to add it. Hopefully the bio-sketch will be sufficient to
address our contributions. (04)
Thanks again for all your work on this. (05)
Mike (06)
page 3 (07)
will design and implementation => will design and implement (08)
develop development => include development? (09)
Incomplete sentence: The use and linking of metadata, controlled
vocabularies, and ontologies, for intelligent search and decision
support. (010)
page 4 (011)
find quickly => quickly find (012)
page 5 (013)
material (4) => material; (4) (014)
[and] stakeholders (015)
ontologies, but that it needs => ontologies; it also needs (016)
select for => select? (017)
is [a] rapidly developing (018)
grows[,] since (019)
ONTOLOG => Ontolog? (020)
page 6 (021)
and a two-day => a two-day (022)
with sub-teams and the appropriate => into sub-teams with appropriate (023)
[and] community (024)
header => headed (025)
this year => 2008 (026)
page 7 (027)
files, emails, web pages either visible => shared files, email
archives, and web pages, either public (028)
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