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From: Matthew West <dr.matthew.west@xxxxxxxxx>
Date: Tue, 19 Apr 2011 09:36:11 -0400
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Dear Michael U,    (01)

I noticed a split infinitive in the following:    (02)

" It is important to not get too wrapped up in the categories or the
framework itself, but to use them as a communication tool.      (03)

Ontology Value Metrics"    (04)

I suggest replacing this with:    (05)

"It is important not to get too wrapped up in the categories or the
framework itself, but to use them as a communication tool.      (06)

Ontology Value Metrics"    (07)


Regards    (08)

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