Dear Michael U, (01)
Two minor points in the following: (02)
" - Reduced unnecessary complexity results in fewer conflicts and overlaps,
and thus fewer primitives. (03)
- Interoperability and integration among disparate systems and data (fewer
silos) at less cost and lower development risk " (04)
1. First bullet does not read smoothly (to me). (05)
2. The first bullet has a full stop at the end, the second does not. (06)
I suggest: (07)
" - Reduced unnecessary complexity resulting in fewer conflicts and
overlaps, and thus fewer primitives. (08)
- Interoperability and integration among disparate systems and data (fewer
silos) at less cost and lower development risk. " (09)
Regards (010)
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