Leo, (01)
A couple of questions, and suggestions: (02)
Under "Generate excitement and instill confidence", what does "avoid an
ontology winter" mean? (03)
The paragraph beginning with "Flexibility and agility in different"... just
before the "Building the Foundation" section should be rewritten to make more
sense. The flow is not straightforward. (04)
In the second paragraph under "Building the Foundation", the word "happening"
should be replaced with something like "being practiced"? Also "The cover"
should be "They cover". (05)
At the bottom pf page 4, "Second, the we collected", please strike the word
"the". (06)
In the final quotation, "are different - there" should be "are different -
they". (07)
Otherwise, this is a terrific writing effort! (08)
Tim Wilson (09)
---- "Obrst wrote:
> Ok, folks, a slight update:
>
> For the current Communique, please look at:
>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1z1oyuFxRfhJrzaEcORPT5hWfQqP36uzz7mn8GG-sxDM/edit?hl=en&authkey=CO-n3oEN#.
>
> Thanks,
> Leo
>
>
> From: ontology-summit-bounces@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
>[mailto:ontology-summit-bounces@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Obrst, Leo J.
> Sent: Saturday, April 16, 2011 2:40 PM
> To: Ontology Summit 2011 discussion (ontology-summit@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx)
> Subject: [ontology-summit] Ontology Summit 2011 Symposium Agenda and rules
>
> All,
>
> The final Ontology Summit 2011 Symposium agenda is at:
>http://ontolog.cim3.net/cgi-bin/wiki.pl?OntologySummit2011_Symposium#nid2PU5.
>
> Please note that the following rule (the "Fabian Rule" as we are calling it
>from last year, named for our colleague and co-organizer Fabian Neuhaus) will
>be in effect during the Symposium for discussion on the Communique. This will
>help us avoid disruptions, argumentation over trifles, and improve the quality
>of our discourse.
>
>
> Any participant of the Ontology Summit can submit by email change requests or
>raise questions for debate at the workshop until the deadline of Saturday
>evening, 6 pm EDT, April 16, 2011. This is prior to the Ontology Summit
>Symposium.
>
> After the deadline, a new change request/question can be only raised if it is
>supported by at least 3 participants of the Summit.
>
> Leo and Ram's addendum: We will strictly enforce a time limit on the
>discussion per issue.
>
> As previous Ontology Summit old-timers will recall, much of our time was
>spent wordsmithing. Unfortunately (or fortunately), we don't have time for
>that. Having an overview of the open issues prior to the Ontology Summit
>Symposium allows the organizers to plan/adjust the agenda and the discussion
>moderators to ensure that all issues are addressed. Please note that the
>first day of the Symposium is devoted to the Track champions' reports and the
>Communiqué discussion. The Communiqué will be final at the end of the first
>day.
>
> Thanks, and we look forward to seeing (or hearing) you all at the Symposium
>Monday!
>
> Ram and Leo
>
> (010)
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