A few more typos:
In paragraph 2SGR there should be a comma after "generally" since it is
in appositive. (01)
In 2SHZ "true with no ontology" is confusing. I suggest "true absent
ontology". In the same paragraph "confunction" should be "conjunction". (02)
I agree that the "flexibility" text needs improvement. For example,
i question the "flexibility" of triple stores since 1) metadata
(context, provenence, ...) on statements is awkward to provide, and
2) any method for representing a higher arity relation is complex. (03)
-- doug foxvog (04)
On Sun, April 17, 2011 22:06, twilson92@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx said:
> Leo,
>
> A couple of questions, and suggestions:
>
> Under "Generate excitement and instill confidence", what does "avoid an
> ontology winter" mean?
>
> The paragraph beginning with "Flexibility and agility in different"...
> just before the "Building the Foundation" section should be rewritten to
> make more sense. The flow is not straightforward.
>
> In the second paragraph under "Building the Foundation", the word
> "happening" should be replaced with something like "being practiced"?
> Also "The cover" should be "They cover".
>
> At the bottom pf page 4, "Second, the we collected", please strike the
> word "the".
>
> In the final quotation, "are different - there" should be "are different -
> they".
>
> Otherwise, this is a terrific writing effort!
>
> Tim Wilson
>
>
>
> ---- "Obrst wrote:
>> Ok, folks, a slight update:
>>
>> For the current Communique, please look at:
>>
>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1z1oyuFxRfhJrzaEcORPT5hWfQqP36uzz7mn8GG-sxDM/edit?hl=en&authkey=CO-n3oEN#.
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Leo
>>
>>
>> From: ontology-summit-bounces@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
>> [mailto:ontology-summit-bounces@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Obrst,
>> Leo J.
>> Sent: Saturday, April 16, 2011 2:40 PM
>> To: Ontology Summit 2011 discussion (ontology-summit@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx)
>> Subject: [ontology-summit] Ontology Summit 2011 Symposium Agenda and
>> rules
>>
>> All,
>>
>> The final Ontology Summit 2011 Symposium agenda is at:
>> http://ontolog.cim3.net/cgi-bin/wiki.pl?OntologySummit2011_Symposium#nid2PU5.
>>
>> Please note that the following rule (the "Fabian Rule" as we are calling
>> it from last year, named for our colleague and co-organizer Fabian
>> Neuhaus) will be in effect during the Symposium for discussion on the
>> Communique. This will help us avoid disruptions, argumentation over
>> trifles, and improve the quality of our discourse.
>>
>>
>> Any participant of the Ontology Summit can submit by email change
>> requests or raise questions for debate at the workshop until the
>> deadline of Saturday evening, 6 pm EDT, April 16, 2011. This is prior to
>> the Ontology Summit Symposium.
>>
>> After the deadline, a new change request/question can be only raised if
>> it is supported by at least 3 participants of the Summit.
>>
>> Leo and Ram's addendum: We will strictly enforce a time limit on the
>> discussion per issue.
>>
>> As previous Ontology Summit old-timers will recall, much of our time was
>> spent wordsmithing. Unfortunately (or fortunately), we don't have time
>> for that. Having an overview of the open issues prior to the Ontology
>> Summit Symposium allows the organizers to plan/adjust the agenda and
>> the discussion moderators to ensure that all issues are addressed.
>> Please note that the first day of the Symposium is devoted to the Track
>> champions' reports and the Communiqué discussion. The Communiqué will
>> be final at the end of the first day.
>>
>> Thanks, and we look forward to seeing (or hearing) you all at the
>> Symposium Monday!
>>
>> Ram and Leo
>>
>>
>
>
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