Looks good, Stefano and Claudio! (01)
A couple of suggestions: (02)
1) Change "from their discipline viewpoint" to "from each discipline's
viewpoint" (or "point of view") (03)
2) Change "differed" to "different":
"The emphasis is on ontological analysis and the goal is to show how the
different disciplines interact ..." (04)
3) Also, you might want to provide links to FOIS, FOMI, WOMI, and perhaps
expand the acronyms. (05)
Thanks,
Leo (06)
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Subject: [iaoa-council] IAOA summer school: preliminary webpage (07)
Dear all, (08)
here is the preliminary webpage with some info on the school
http://iaoa.org/isc2012/index.php (09)
Pls, send comments asap (and check our english!).
We would like to distribute this link to the IAOA mailing lists already by
tomorrow evening. (010)
Cheers
-Stefano (011)
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