RE: 4/26/07, Uschold, Michael F <michael.f.uschold@xxxxxxxxxx>:
It would be a very good idea to highlight at the beginning who the intended audience is. Who is the intended audience?
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The major dimensions should be highlighted, minimaly in boldface. Now they are hidden in a long string of paragraphs. Oddly, this is done for the lesser dimensions, why not for the major ones?
I agree, list them out in the beginning - 7 dimensions were identified 1. Expressiveness 2. Structure 3. Granularity 4. Intended Use 5. Automated Reasoning 6. Prescriptive vs Descriptive 7. Governance
Furthermore, section [sub]headings should highlight the different groups of dimensions, semantic and pragmatic.
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The findings start of(f) with a dimension, this is odd.
Wasn't one finding the acceptance of a proposed dimension though?
The findings section should be introduced, not just launched into. A summary list of the findings too.
I think the more important distinction that is missed here is: "engineered for a purpose" vs. "being at attempt to model reality".
So here is a possible alternative.In one case, it is an accurate reflection of
reality. In the other, it is whether it meets the intended purpose. It is kind of a meta-purpose of the ontology (compared to the intended
purpose dimension) An open list at the end to record proposed alternatives and solutions.
Debbie --
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Michael
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