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> Thanks for all of the corrections. I have attached the latest copy.
> Check that your edits are included. (01)
Still needed are (02)
page 3 (03)
develop development => include development? (04)
page 5 (05)
ontologies, it also => ontologies; it also (06)
or for ontologies => or ontologies (07)
> I would prefer that both you and BBN be mentioned in the Project
> Description. How about adding something to the "Engage at the
> frontiers of science and engineering research and education"
> section? Could you expand slightly on "he will be engaging in
> research on federation among OOR and non-OOR registries,
> repositories, and collaborative development environments (including
> Semantic MediaWiki)." which I already have in the Key Personnel
> document? We don't have much more space in the 7 pages, but this is
> important. (08)
How about adding the following sentence at the end of section 2.2. (09)
In particular, Mike Dean, an OOR co-convener, will engage in research
on federation among OOR and non-OOR registries, repositories, and
collaborative development environments (including the emerging area of
Semantic Wikis). (010)
Thanks! (011)
Mike (012)
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