| Hi Peter, all 
 I need more time to study the communique in detail, but in principle after a glance
 I am also happy to say OK for now (and well done everybody)
 
 as an ongoin progress thereof, however (dont let dust settle on it)
 what about allowing individuals to link/post their comments and
possible reservations on a related wiki page, that can be also used as
draft/note taking  for the next release?
 
 pdm
 
 
 
 On 4/27/07, Deborah L. McGuinness <dlm@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
i agree with this as well.what if we make a near term deadline for clean up suggestions and do
 another release?
 deborah
 
 
 Uschold, Michael F wrote:
 >
I strongly endorse the idea of having a new version with recent
comments done sooner rather than later.  It was done with a
lot of thought and discusion, but ultimately it was a hurry job to get
it done in the two days.
 >
 > Standing back to tidy up a few rough edges will make us look better and better serve our goals.
 >
 > Mike
 >
 >
 >
 > ==========================
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 > -----Original Message-----
 > From: Peter F Brown [mailto:
peter@xxxxxxxxxx]
 > Sent: Thursday, April 26, 2007 11:30 AM
 > To: Ontology Summit 2007 Forum
 > Subject: Re: [ontology-summit] ...Please endorse the Communique
 >
 > Peter:
 >
There are inevitably going to be some suggested edits that come as a
result of standing back a bit after the event ("distance lends clarity
to the view"). I entered some reservations regarding the text mainly so
that we *didn't* descend into a full-blown editing process in the short
time we had: otherwise we would still be on paragraph one or two.
 >
 >
I would endorse Tom Gruber's and a few others' comment that we should
consider this as a first best effort but then I think we need to answer
five important questions:
 > - to whom is the communiqué intended to be addressed?
 > - until when do we give everyone the opportunity to submitting proposals for textual changes (a deadline)?
 > - how long do we give a redactional team to integrate afap the remarks received?
 > - when do we open and close a further round of endorsement of the (possibly) revised text?
 > - how do we intend promoting the final result to the target audience?
 >
 > Best regards, and sincere thanks to Frank and Olivier for coordinating all this so far
 >
 > Peter
 >
 > -----Original Message-----
 > From: ontology-summit-bounces@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:
ontology-summit-bounces@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Peter Yim
 > Sent: 26 April 2007 20:00
 > To: Ontology Summit 2007 Forum
 > Subject: Re: [ontology-summit] ...Please endorse the Communique
 >
 > Michael, ... this also goes to Barry Smith and Deborah MacPherson who sent me their suggested edits offline ... et al,
 >
 > Re: 
http://ontolog.cim3.net/cgi-bin/wiki.pl?OntologySummit2007_Communique
 >
 > Thank you for the suggestions and the time and effort you put into it.
 >
 >
The version of the communique (v1.0.0 / 2007.04.24) was supposed to be
'frozen' after its review, collaborative editing and wordsmithing
exercise at the "Communique session" on Apr-24 morning, before it was
adopted at the Summit Symposium (Apr-24 afternoon) by those at the
Ontoogy Summit 2007 Symposium session. I agree with Michael, I wished
these were brought up at the session and went into the discussion
leading up to Communique v1.0.0 adoption.
 >
 > As such, any
further/substantive edits (other than typos and formatting like
boldface highlight etc. ... which I will work on) will have to wait
until a 'next version' (which did mention as being a possibility during
the discussion yesterday) is opened up for review, edit, adoption
through a similar community process.
 >
 > I shall pass all
received suggestions (if you haven't aleady posted them publicly) to
the Communique Session co-chairs, Olivier Bodenreider and Frank Olken,
and will defer to them to recommend the 're-openning' of a follow-on
discussion to generate a "next version"
 > of the communique.
 >
 > ... Hope this is ok with you.
 >
 >
My outstanding task is to collect all the names of people who would
endorse v1.0.0 by Apr-30 and then add that onto the document (as an
integral part of the release.)
 >
 > With that, may we still
have your endorsement to this currently adopted version (v1.0.0) of the
communique? ... I look forward to all your positive responses.
 >
 > Thanks & regards.  =ppy
 > --
 >
 >
 > On 4/26/07, Uschold, Michael F <
michael.f.uschold@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
 >
 >> I broadly approve of this document. In the large, it does a great job
 >> of achieving its intended purpose.  I regret not having been there.
 >>
 >> In the small... I have a few suggestions, in case it is not too late
 >> to make changes/updates w/o starting a war :-))
 >>
 >> It would be a very good idea to highlight at the beginning who the
 >> intended audience is.
 >> --
 >>
 >> The major dimensions should be highlighted, minimaly in boldface. Now
 >> they are hidden in a long string of paragraphs. Oddly, this is done
 >> for the lesser dimensions, why not for the major ones?
 >> Furthermore, section [sub]headings should highlight the different
 >> groups of dimensions, semantic and pragmatic.
 >> --
 >>
 >> The findings start of with a dimension, this is odd. It also mentions
 >> "The governance dimension, as if it has been mentioned before, which
 >> it has not. The findings section should be introduced, not just
 >> launched into.
 >> --
 >>
 >> The NUMBER of concept and relations is not even a crude measure of
 >> generality. It is at best under limited circustances correlated with
 >> granularity. 
E.g. if the scope is constant, and the coverage of the
 >> topics in the ontology is uniform, then more granularity would require
 >> more concepts and relations.  But you can have zillions of concepts
 >> for a huge domain and still be low granularity.  You could have a
 >> smallish domain where all but a small part is covered in little
 >> detail, with one bit covered in great detail. The number of concepts tells you nothing.
 >> This might be one of those things like pornography, where it may be
 >> impossible to have a metric for testing it, but we recognize it when
 >> we see it.
 >> --
 >>
 >> The examples for intended use are all over the place. Some are
 >> general, some are highly specific. It makes more sense to try to have
 >> a lot of coverage with general categories and maybe toss in a few
 >> examples.  I would suggest something like this to replace the portion
 >> of the current
 >> text:
 >>
 >> "Ontologies are used for a variety of purposes. These include human to
 >> human communication (e.g. controlled vocabularies for recording
 >> medical diagnoses), semantic interoperability & integration among
 >> heterogeneous databases and applications, neutral authoring, data
 >> semantics specification for databases or data entry, improved search &
 >> question answering, sharing and reuse. Ontologies are also used in
 >> ontology-driven software engineering, where the ontology is the basis
 >> for a software specification. In conjunction with automated reasoning,
 >> this can give rise to improved reliabilty, reduced need for hardwired
 >> code, reduced software maintenance costs and improved flexibility and
 >> adaptability."
 >>
 >> I took out agent communication languages because it seemed too
 >> specific, but someone might want to toss it back in somwhere.
 >> --
 >>
 >> I'm a little unhappy with the Prescriptive vs. Descriptive dimension.
 >> I'm not familiar with people building ontologies to describe
 >> contemporary semantic usage. Normally if you want to do that, you make
 >> a glossary or controlled vocabulary or write a paper, you don't
 >> capture that in an ontology. Now someone may prove me wrong on this,
 >> so that's fine. But I still don't think it is common enough to have it
 >> be the definition of descriptive as a point on a dimension opposed
 >> with prescriptive.
 >>
 >> A simple contrast between prescriptive and descriptive is:
 >> * you should do it this way, vs.
 >> * I'm doing the best I can to describe what I see (but I don't care
 >> what you do)
 >>
 >> But there are many possible reasons that "you should do it this way":
 >>
 >> 1. you should do it this way because it is THE scientifically and
 >> philosophically correct way to model reality 2. you should do it this
 >> way because on balance, taking into account many different tradoffs
 >> among the various equally reasonable 'right ways' to model reality,
 >> this is the best one.
 >> 3. you should choose this particular 'right way' if you need to use
 >> your ontology to do X, but you should use that particular 'right way'
 >> if you need to use your ontology do to Y.
 >> Or maybe even:
 >> 4. You should do it this way because it is the one 'right way' to
 >> characterize the current contemporary semantic usage in this given
 >> domain.
 >> 5. etc.
 >>
 >> I think the more important distinction that is missed here is:
 >> "engineered for a purpose" vs. "being at attempt to model reality".
 >> The first is 3. above, the second is 1 above.
 >>
 >> So here is a possible alternative.
 >>
 >> Have a normative/description dimension, but keep it simple as above.
 >>
 >> Add a new "to model reality" vs. "engineered for purpose" dimension.
 >> The difference is in what is the held up as the test for whether the
 >> ontology is 'good'. In one case, it is an accurate reflection of
 >> reality. In the other, it is whether it meets the intended purpose. It
 >> is kind of a meta-purpose of the ontology (compared to the intended
 >> purpose dimension)
 >>
 >>
 >> This falls a bit short of a complete counterproposal, but hopefuly not
 >> by too much.
 >> --
 >>
 >>
 >> If it is too late for changes, then I just wasted an hour or so...
 >> And anyway, it's too late to stay up any longer.
 >>
 >> Michael
 >>
 >>
 >> ==========================
 >> Michael Uschold
 >> M&CT, Phantom Works
 >> 425 373-2845
 >> michael.f.uschold@xxxxxxxxxx
 >> ==========================
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 >> -----Original Message-----
 >> From: Peter Yim [mailto:peter.yim@xxxxxxxx]
 >> Sent: Tuesday, April 24, 2007 7:56 PM
 >> To: Ontology Summit 2007 Forum
 >> Subject: [ontology-summit] OntologySummit2007 has been a great success!
 >> ...Please endorse the Communique
 >>
 >> I am most excited to report that we had a REALLY successful 2-days of
 >> workshops and Symposium.
 >>
 >> Members of the organizing committee would like to express their
 >> heartfelt "thank you" to everyone who contributed to the 3-months'
 >> virtual discourse and the two days of face-to-face meetings. (... My
 >> personal apologies on some of the glitches that remote audience had
 >> experienced during the last 2-days.)
 >>
 >> One of our major deliverables is our Communique, which you can find
 >> at:
 >> 
http://ontolog.cim3.net/cgi-bin/wiki.pl?OntologySummit2007_Communique
 >>
 >> We need your endorsement to this Communique. Kindly review the
 >> document and confirm that by e-mail to me (at <
peter.yim@xxxxxxxx>,
 >> off-line, if you agree with the content and haven't already done so)
 >> on/before April 30, 2007, so we go into history with your name on the
 >> list of people who are endorsing the "Ontology Summit 2007 Communique".
 >>
 >> Thanks & regards.  =ppy
 >>
 >> P.S. proceedings of the 2-days' face-to-face meetings can be found at:
 >>
 >> o  2007.04.23 Monday am (EDT) - Session-1:
 >> http://ontolog.cim3.net/cgi-bin/wiki.pl?OntologySummit2007_Framework_S
 >> es
 >> sion
 >>
 >> o  2007.04.23 Monday pm (EDT) - Session-2:
 >> http://ontolog.cim3.net/cgi-bin/wiki.pl?OntologySummit2007_Population_
 >> Se
 >> ssion
 >>
 >> o  2007.04.24 Tuesday am (EDT) - Session-3:
 >> http://ontolog.cim3.net/cgi-bin/wiki.pl?OntologySummit2007_Communique_
 >> Se
 >> ssion
 >>
 >> o  2007.04.24 Tuesday pm (EDT) - Session-4:
 >> http://ontolog.cim3.net/cgi-bin/wiki.pl?OntologySummit2007_Symposium
 >> ("The Summit Meeting" proper)
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