Bob et al., (01)
I have sent in my commented version (and uploaded it to the ontolog
file-sharing workspace). (02)
Note that I have left Bob's original draft as:
http://ontolog.cim3.net/file/work/health-ont/NHIN-RFI/NHIN-RFI_response-version_to_circulate_to_onto--BobSmith_20050117a.doc (03)
My commented version is accessible as:
http://ontolog.cim3.net/file/work/health-ont/NHIN-RFI/NHIN-RFI_response-version_to_circulate_to_onto--BobSmith_20050117b_w-Yim-comments.doc (04)
Contact me if anyone has trouble getting to them. (05)
Regards. -ppy
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Bob Smith wrote Mon, 17 Jan 2005 19:19:39 -0800: (07)
> Hello,
>
> Attached is the current Draft Response to Dr. Brailer’s RFI.
>
> This document introduces Ontolog, states our thesis, replies to Part A
> questions, and sets the groundwork for responses to Part B and C
> questions.
>
> The “B” Team is devoting time early tomorrow to receiving your inputs
> and completing open and appropriate parts of Parts B and C.
>
> Please review and add comments *highlighted RED LINE* so that we can
> include your suggested changes. We expect to make one last revision,
>
> If needed, please call me at 714 536 1084
>
> Thanks,
>
> Bob Smith
>
> .
>
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