[ontoiop-forum] Comments for OntoIOp teleconference (n.53): Wed 20143.02

["terry.longstreth" <terry.longstreth@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

I may not be able to attend the meeting.   Here are some notes/suggestions about the draft submission document distributed by Till on the 25th.

1. General - Throughout the document, starting with section SCOPE-  Replace "International Standard" with "OMG Specification"
2. General - The term  "..allows for" or " ...allows for expressing", used throughout Section 7.2 is  non-standard English     I think it may be a mistranslation of genehmigen or ermöglichen.  Here are some examples; unfortunately I didn't have time to do more.
   
1. 7.2.1 -
1. Title - DOL enables _expression_ of  OSMs and links at different levels of detail
2. Body -  DOL is a mechanism for expressing logically heterogeneous OSMs.   It can be used to combine sentences and structured OSMs expressed in different conforming OSM languages
   and logics into single documents or modules. With DOL, sentences or structured OSMs of previously existing OSMs in
   conforming languages can be reused by literally including them into a DOL OSM. A minimum of wrapping constructs and other annotations (e.g. for identifying the language of a sentence ) are provided. 
2. 7.2.2
1. Title  - DOL includes provisions for expressing links between OSMs.
2. Body (near end of paragraph; DOL allows for expressing signature translations in such links, ) DOL allows such links to express signature translations, 
3. (later in same paragraph: DOL also allows for combining/merging OSMs)  DOL can also be used to combine or merge OSMs
   

Regards,
Terry

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